Beta Reader Wanted! Avid Mafia Romance Reader Needed

Beta Reader Needed for 100K Romance Novel

I’m looking for an experienced mafia romance beta reader to read a completed romance manuscript and provide honest, detailed feedback from a reader’s perspective.

**Genre:** Mafia Romance

**Word Count:** Approximately 100,000 words

**Budget:** $100 fixed price

I’m looking for feedback on:

* Overall impression and reader engagement

* Plot holes or confusing sections

* Character development and believability

* Pacing and story flow

* Romance/chemistry and emotional impact

* Dialogue that feels unnatural

* Repetitive wording or scenes

* Voice and tone consistency

* Timeline or continuity issues

* Whether the story meets expectations for this romance niche

* Strongest parts of the book and areas that need improvement

I will provide a Beta Reader Report template with specific questions that must be completed.

I also require inline comments in the manuscript to point out specific issues as you read, such as confusing sections, repetition, dialogue problems, inconsistencies, unnecessary scenes, or areas that could have a stronger emotional impact.

This is beta reading, not proofreading or line editing. I’m looking for thoughtful reader-level feedback that will help me strengthen the manuscript.

Please include in your proposal:

* Your experience reading or beta reading mafia romance

* Any previous beta reading experience

* A sample of previous feedback/report, if available

* Your turnaround time for approximately 100,000 words

* Confirmation that you can provide both the completed report and inline comments

Please start your proposal with “BETA”.